Kids will enjoy this.
This was executed well.
Good use of camera angles.
animation was good.
layouts, lighting.. all good.
The illusion of being on a Deck above a lake was a real nice touch.
The one MINOR thing that disappointed me was the lack of detail put into the rail in the background. I'm not sure why I noticed that or why I would like to see more detail in the rail. Maybe its because te water looks so damnd good, in contrast to the rail.. you would expect more, eh? Oh well.
-Your intended audience was for kids that probably are too young to be on NG, so i'm assuming you posted this here strictly for criticism... and i gave my best shot at writing a review
Thanks for the subtitles as well. :) I know most people don't mind reading them... they really souped up Cora the Cobra. to help know whats going on. "Count from 1 till 5" seems a little odd to say.... "Count from 1 TO 5." I think that's what you were going for.
Thanks for you review,
i' ll change the subtitles right away. You are right about the fence though! I tried to decorate it with some asian figures. Unfortunatly i'm quite new to 3Dmax and the fence didn't turned out the way i wanted too.
Please excuse me. BYE
This was cool.
Where did you htink of that. Honestly?
3rd Daily pick. I Bet you!
I support this 100%!
This game was fun and inspiring at the same time.
I give up!
Right off the back I went to the OPTIONS menu and noticed the EASY OR HARD option which is great. I chose hard.
The first guy killed me the first time playing.
When I pressed continue, i noticed it automatically too me back to Easy (3 lives)... another thing I noticed, under the bow and aarow guy... theres a block that i try to jump on but I fall right threw as soo nas I stand on the right half.... I didnt get passes the guy with the hammer, but i still playeed this for 20 minutes it was a blast.
I love this
It sounds good
This piece tells a violent story. I love it, it's very dramatic!
10 stars for being a concept
I understand that you did not want to use a reference and I think this worked out well. Something about both, her nose and perspective of her right eye seem 'off' but they were executed nicely. The lighting / shadows look good over all except maybe inside of the ear.
The hair looks awesome, the only thing I would say is the chopsticks in her hair could use some more detail, but it's fine either way.
Thank you! Couldn't agree more with you there, the ear I didn't pay a whole lot of attention to, I just knew I wanted her to be an elf lol.
Cute character, nice colors and perspective, well done! I like this.
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