Kids will enjoy this.
This was executed well.
Good use of camera angles.
animation was good.
layouts, lighting.. all good.
The illusion of being on a Deck above a lake was a real nice touch.
The one MINOR thing that disappointed me was the lack of detail put into the rail in the background. I'm not sure why I noticed that or why I would like to see more detail in the rail. Maybe its because te water looks so damnd good, in contrast to the rail.. you would expect more, eh? Oh well.
-Your intended audience was for kids that probably are too young to be on NG, so i'm assuming you posted this here strictly for criticism... and i gave my best shot at writing a review
Thanks for the subtitles as well. :) I know most people don't mind reading them... they really souped up Cora the Cobra. to help know whats going on. "Count from 1 till 5" seems a little odd to say.... "Count from 1 TO 5." I think that's what you were going for.